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Favourite Monkey Crisps

June 25th, 2008 · 2 Comments



Favourite Monkey Crisps

Originally uploaded by Alexandra Mitchell


Some packaging and copywriting that I found interesting, from Favourite Monkey. In general, packets of crisps in pubs come with lots of copy about how much the company cares about you, and the potatoes, and you enjoying the potatoes now they’ve been made into crisps.

This is clearly setting itself up in opposition to that, and the slightly snide tone is something I don’t think anyone needs to see more of. Given that they also mention there are no artificial flavours or preservatives, it’s not like the key message is “They’re made in a vast factory – get over it, bitches.”

What is good is a bit more awareness of context they are -the crisps are going to be eaten in a pub, and the bag is actually designed for sharing. What’s positive about their packaging actually works; they tell you what they are (a snack food) and what they’re for (adults. In pubs.)

Not everyone is as alive as you are to the marketing context of your product. But everyone is going to be aware of the context they’re in when they buy it; and making that context a part of your marketing is going to be much more relevant to customers than being dismissive of your competitors could ever be.

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Changes

June 23rd, 2008 · 1 Comment

On Sunday night, when I got back from holiday, I went to look at Moo‘s site, only to see this –

Moo Yikes Screen

– and the first thing I thought was, “oh no, the door is closed, how else will I get in on Monday?”. I immediately thought of writing this up as a comment on how we negotiate the difference between an online and an offline world, or on how the way copy is presented changes our perceptions of where and how data exists – a graphic of a note on a landing page becomes a real note on a door in a building. But actually, this is my way of saying I’ve left the School and today was my first day at Moo. The products and marketing are great, as are the rest of the team, and it’s awesome to have the chance to be part of that. Really looking forward to more days there…

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Good Copy

June 18th, 2008 · 1 Comment

Bad copywriting is something I complain about quite a lot – sometimes it’s because it’s poorly proofread (and I start planning the Alex Mitchell School Of Copywriting), sometimes it’s trying too hard to be something it’s not, sometimes because one tiny phrase just annoys me. Today, I’ve seen two bits of copywriting I really liked.

The first was this post from meebo about how they went about designing the ads for their site. It feels very open, which is what’s going to be useful in persuading a user base not only to accept something new, but also to use it. Things are presented as suggestions and opinions, but the fact that ads are going to be there is not open for questions; it’s a post about how to make the best of what the site have done, not about what the site have done.

The second is from Tate Britain:
Tate Britain advert

It’s fun, enough so that you can miss things while reading it quickly, and it plays on the ideas of the Tate collections being pretentious, while mentioning enough different pictures and styles to make it sound interesting. I always enjoy an obvious punchline, too, which probably helps.

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This Bottle

June 14th, 2008 · 3 Comments



This Bottle Grafitti

Originally uploaded by Alexandra Mitchell


I’ve been reading quite a bit recently about differentiation, and about how the best way to market is to find a single thing that makes your product remarkable.

This bit of graffiti made me think – because Innocent have actually made this work for them very well – people aren’t going to automatically buy your product because it has something remarkable about it. They’re going to think about your product. They’re going to judge your product on that single thing that you think is so important. Have you thought through everything about that? Are you happy with dealing with all those implications?

I want to see more marketing to smart people, more marketing that works through everything it says before the consumer sees an advert or a product.

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